Chapter 36 [Golden Truth] Level Summary
1. The inspiration for this copy’s level scene comes from the fourth level of “Call of Duty 6: Modern Warfare 2”: Don’t speak Russian. This is the material provided by a friend of mine. At the beginning, I actually planned to start with a small scene and write about thugs killing people on the streets. , but my friend said that readers now like big scenes when reading books, and small scenes cannot attract people, so he provided me with this material suggestion. After I read it, it was indeed shocking. You can search for it by yourself.
2. Regarding the reincarnation mechanism, some readers reported that the plot is repetitive or the pace is slow. I will pay attention to this, because the level plots are all my original ideas. I borrowed the lens narrative mode from "Source Code" to reflect the protagonist's experience. The changes after each round of death loading turned out to be a bit delayed. After all, the movie is different from the novel.
Later levels will definitely be improved. In terms of rhythm, the first dungeon needs to lay out some foreshadowing, emotions, and main lines. It has been reduced as much as possible. I will pay attention to it in the future.
3. In terms of character design, this is a weakness I have felt since writing Hunting. Except for the protagonist, the supporting characters are all relatively facial-looking. In Ghosts and Gods, I focused on strengthening this point. I like to write the stories behind the characters, but when writing In this chapter of Crisis, I still made the same old mistake. Jillian and others were a bit weak. I thought about sacrificing the middle-aged policeman to highlight the glory, but later I gave up because I was afraid that the plot would drag on. I will follow up. Try to use more language, actions, and expressions to highlight the character.
4. In the early stages of the new book, I saw many old wilderness and hunting book friends coming to support it. I was really touched. Thank you all for your recommendations, monthly votes and rewards. I will definitely work hard to update it and update it well! Update as soon as possible! I hope you can continue to support me more, because now whether a book can be promoted depends on the reading data;
5. This book is the first time I have written a complete outline. I hope I can make further progress in this book, and I hope I can write a story that will satisfy everyone.
grateful!