Section 309
[Talent: Ninth-grade Spiritual Root]
[Cultivation: First-grade Qi Refining]
"Alas, ninth-grade spiritual root."
Lu Changsheng looked at his son Lu Xianzhi's spirit body and sighed softly.
As a person who was promoted from ninth-grade spiritual root to fifth-grade spiritual root, he knew the gap between spiritual roots.
If his son did not have a great opportunity, he would at most be in the late stage of Qi Refining.
"But as my son, he is a great opportunity in itself."
"When I have the strength, I will build my own family spiritual land. With the method of longevity in heaven and earth, I will have hope for forming a pill and a primordial infant, not to mention building a foundation."
Lu Changsheng exhaled lightly.
Thinking of the matter of establishing his own family again.
After so many years in Qingzhu Mountain, he married and had children, and he also had a sense of belonging in his heart.
He really regarded Qingzhu Mountain as half of his home.
But the idea of being independent and establishing his own family of cultivation has never been dispelled.
After all, Lu Changsheng did not regard himself as a member of the Lu family after all, but only regarded Qingzhu Mountain as half of his home.
So his children, under his arrangement, did not fully integrate into the Lu family.
Because Lu Changsheng knew it very well.
In the future, he and his children were destined to take a different path from the Lu family.
If he had stayed in the Lu family, with the continuous improvement of his strength, he would most likely become the ancestor of the Lu family and take charge of the Lu family.
But Lu Changsheng didn't want to do that.
Becoming the ancestor of the Lu family and taking charge of the Lu family was a responsibility in his eyes.
He didn't want to take this responsibility.
He could spend his thoughts, energy, and resources to cultivate his own children one by one.
Even if they were ninth-grade spiritual roots, he was willing to spend time, energy, and resources.
But he couldn't do that for the children of the Lu family.
But if he had stayed in the Lu family and became the ancestor of the Lu family, he couldn't just ignore them.
So in Lu Changsheng's view, it was the best choice to establish his own family with his children.
He would not forget the Lu family, and when he had the ability, he would take care of them to the best of his ability and help them a few times.
After all, a drop of water is returned with a spring.
Besides, his current relationship with the Lu family could not be severed.
End of the volume
The protagonist has established his foundation, and he has to start a new chapter.
So I'll write a comment and say something.
The main reason is that I wrote this comment last month, but because I wrote too slowly and was too slow, it was delayed until now, and I forgot to post it yesterday.
Alas, I don't know how to evaluate my own pace. I won't say anything, just give my brother two punches.
First of all, thank you for your support, which made this book a masterpiece at the beginning of last month.
I still remember how excited I was at that time.
Before it was put on the shelves, the editor said that the performance was good, with 2,600 follow-up readings, but only 1,000 first orders. I thought the book collapsed.
Unexpectedly, as I wrote, the performance has been steadily improving, which really surprised me.
Looking back at the plot I wrote, I don't know what to say.
100 points, barely give it a passing score, although I can read it myself, there are indeed many problems.
This is also when I wrote it, there was no outline or detailed outline, I just wrote it out of interest.
When I was writing, I thought about starting from being a son-in-law, marrying a secular woman and having children, and then having children with a spiritual root girl, a spiritual body girl, a fairy, a princess, a female emperor, a goddess, etc., and writing about each level.
But after I really started writing, the content and plot began to get out of control.
And I would have different ideas every day, and my thoughts would continue to diverge.
When writing this kind of thing, there is no way to change it after writing it, and the latter can only fill the holes in the former.
For example, the biggest pitfall of this book is actually the plot ideas before and after it was put on the shelves.
In the fifty-two chapters, I realized that there was a problem.
My intuition after reading books for many years told me that the content was too bland and boring, and it must be exciting.
But I knew it, but I didn’t know how to be exciting and interesting at the time.
So I took the Qu Changge plot as an expectation and released it in advance.
I immediately drew a peach blossom Gu, thinking of increasing the excitement.
But after writing it, I still felt that it was not good enough. I thought that the protagonist was trapped in Qingzhu Mountain and had to go out to have something to do and be happy.
So there was the Kowloon Market plot.
But after leaving Qingzhu Mountain and arriving at Jiulong Market, I felt that I lacked the warmth of family and a sense of security.
And coming to the market is like opening a new map, and I have to lay out a lot of things.
As a result, when I wrote it, not only was there no excitement, but it was also framed by daily trivialities, and the content seemed very watery.
Originally, Zhang Shan, the owner of the talisman shop, two apprentices, Gao He, the next-door neighbor, and so on, these characters would have other plots.
But when I wrote here, because the performance of the listing was also considered to be broken, I was actually quite anxious, thinking about how to write.
In my mind, I thought about giving the protagonist something to do, and wanted the Lu family's things to push the protagonist and let the protagonist show off, so all these bland plots were diluted.
The plot of the Jindan girl was also advanced for this reason, used to improve strength, improve the trump card, and give the protagonist space to perform.
But after writing this plot and preparing to do things, I found that I lacked time to settle.
Things can't all come out at once, they have to be done step by step.
At this time, I wanted to lay out the Lu family, to make the Lu family have problems both inside and outside, so that the protagonist can do things and show his edge, so there was the plot of Lu Miaoyang.
But when this plot came out, it caused another wave of fun.
The idea changed again and again, and it affected the subsequent plot path.
There was no choice but to change the text.
After this round of revisions, I gradually gave up struggling.
Because on that day, I also read the book again, and I roughly realized what the problem was.
But if you know the problem, you know it. There is no way to go back and correct it, and there is no way to get back on track at once.
Moreover, the previous plot has already dissuaded many people. If the style is drastically changed, it will be equivalent to screening readers.
This is why everyone keeps saying the pace is slow, but the pace is still like this.
When it comes to being anxious, I am definitely more anxious than you are.
After all, this book has made a good profit. I will no longer tighten screws in the future, and I may also consider buying a BYD to drive an online ride-hailing service.
But I can’t do anything about it myself, I really can’t stand it anymore.
I don’t know how to write a fun enough plot.
Moreover, in this case of rhythm, it cannot be solved by improving foundation building alone.
Because time has not progressed and the protagonist's children have not grown up, this plot will be difficult to follow.
If you rush to build the foundation, there will be no place to show off, and no plot will come out, and you will fall into the rhythm of forcing the plot again, and problems will occur again.
Moreover, there is indeed a big problem with my way of writing articles without detailed outlines or outlines. I just think of them one by one.
For example, after marrying my wife, Sister Lu Miaoge, I prepared to resolve the current matter. The protagonist immediately perfected his Qi and went to the fairy city to build the foundation.
But in Chapter 128, I was cunning and wrote a love disaster, which made me feel that this plot had to be written in ten years, and it was not easy to delay it any longer.
As a result, as soon as I wrote it, various ideas came up, which made me feel numb, and I am still writing now.
Otherwise, in my current opinion, this plot can be written after the protagonist has established his foundation, and the effect will even be better.
After talking so much gossip, everyone knows what will happen in the next volume.
That is, the protagonist obtains the spiritual land, establishes his own family, and starts farming and raising children for development.
Please explain why the protagonist wants to build his own family, rather than just trying to occupy the magpie's nest and have the Tian family replace Qi.
Before it was put on the shelves, many readers left messages saying that they could take over the Lu family by giving birth to babies.
But I never thought about doing this from the beginning.
First, I feel that I have a bad reputation.