I changed Chapters 202 and 203

I changed Chapters 202 and 203

I changed Chapters 202 and 203, but I felt it was not quite right and caused some discomfort. Friends who have read it can go back and read it again. I’m sorry.

I also thought about it. In fact, the main reason for this is that I have written too many cool articles in the past, so I just got used to writing around the protagonist. Everything is based on the protagonist...

But obviously, this set was not very popular at the starting point, so some problems arose.

Then I had a cold a few days ago and was not in a good state. My mind was a little confused and I couldn’t think clearly about the plot. The amount of updates also made me feel a little stressed...

If your mind gets messed up in the future, you should write more slowly. If you take a leave of absence, you won’t mess up the plot if you update slowly.

Finally I want to say...

This is my first time writing a book at Qidian. No one has ever asked me so many questions before. To be honest, I’m really not used to it.

This book has a lot of negative fans, and my operations officer even complained to me. To be honest, I have been writing books for a long time. Normally, I have my own judgment on whether the plot is good or bad. I have never changed the text despite being scolded before. , because writing and reading are different...

This time, I do feel that there are some problems. The main reason is that the chapter about Shang Zhuoyan and the protagonist is a bit too obscene. She should not be like those supporting actresses who hook up with the protagonist and flirt with the protagonist every day. Keep writing this I feel like the writing on her was a lot wrong, and it would be much more pleasing to the eyes if I revise it.

that is it.

So if you say you stand upright after being beaten, that's what I did.

I never refuse to listen to advice. If I make a mistake, I will correct it. I think I will get better and better as I get used to it...

To put it bluntly, I hope everyone will bear with me. Those who originally wanted to ask for a monthly ticket didn’t dare to ask for it...

No more talking, let’s just write down the words. Let’s leave it like this for now. We’ll talk about it later if we have anything to do.