Remarks on the launch
It took 66 days after publishing the book and more than 270,000 words were written, and it is finally time to put it on the shelves. Google search reading
This book has come a long way and is finally on the shelves during the Sanjiang recommendation period. I would like to thank everyone for your continued support.
Let’s first talk about a few problems encountered during the creation process.
Why did the two ancient generations develop flintlock guns and advance technology so outrageously? Why do guns cannot be used in the world of immortality?
Many book friends struggle with this, which I didn’t expect.
I don’t know how many years you have been reading books, but in my mind, more than ten years ago, there were too many such time-travel novels that explored technology and conquered the world. No one said it was unreasonable. I just omitted the corresponding process.
As for why guns cannot be used in the world of cultivating immortals, I think every novel about cultivating immortals can issue this kind of soul torture.
Why? Because I write novels about cultivating immortals. That's how I set it up. If the technology series weapons can really be used in the world of immortality, it will be Li Fan's continuous reincarnation, creating a torrent of steel, and pushing back the world of immortality. That's another story.
There are many more minor issues like this, perhaps because I didn't think carefully about it. I didn't expect that today's readers would be able to argue to such an extent.
But, overall, it's not a big problem.
What really had a fatal impact on the structure of the book was the first time Li Fan came to the world of immortality and discovered the vicissitudes of Cong Yunhai. This process was too short and too hasty.
My original outline was this.
Li Fan went through all kinds of hardships to Liuli Island and joined the fleet after going through a lot of hardships.
Later, he battled wits with Zhang Haobo and took away the captain's position by relying on the treasure that sank into the sea in advance.
After that, Lingchi washed away the miasma of immortality, and a few years later, he came to Ten Thousand Immortals Island.
On the island, after doing tasks for a while, I finally saved up enough contribution points and switched to a water-based technique.
I thought that my path to immortality would be smooth from then on, but I found that within a few years, the water-type spiritual energy in the world became increasingly scarce.
The speed of cultivation is getting slower and slower.
The entire sea of clouds was also sealed off, with no entry or exit allowed.
Panic spread among the monks, and killings gradually began.
Li Fan had no choice but to escape from Ten Thousand Immortals Island and hide on a remote island.
Later, as the sea water dried up, the sea bed was exposed. Li Fan suddenly came to his senses and understood the reason for the difference between his two lives.
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In the meantime, I originally planned to write at least a hundred chapters.
Like the first volume of Lord of Mysteries, the reversal is revealed only after sufficient foreshadowing is done.
But he had to change his attention midway.
Because you may not know that when this book had 100,000 words, it only had over 100 collections.
Even if you try to push the water, you can't get there.
If you really follow the original outline, you will die.
So I had to speed up the progress, and the reversal was completed in more than forty chapters.
Although my grades started to get better after that, they were still not that interesting.
Again, it was too urgent, too rushed.
There are also many flaws that inevitably arise. For example, the underwater treasure is too new and does not look like the treasure in the sea at all.
But we can only try to be as round as possible.
The second problem is that the Xuanhuang Heart Refining Curse shortens the charging time of [Huan Zhen] too much. When it was set, I lacked experience, so the setting directly reduced the time by 11 years.
This also means that I have to fill up these 11 years before I can continue the plot of the previous life.
It has also caused the problem of slow progress reported by many readers.
Because I’m not just writing about this life, I also have to consider laying out clues for the plot development of the next life.
I think these two issues have had a relatively large impact on the structure of this book.
Others are minor details and have little impact.
Let’s talk about a few issues that received more feedback from readers.
The protagonist's cultivation level is improving too slowly.
This book is not a story about upgrading and fighting monsters in the traditional sense. In addition, the protagonist has practiced the Hundred-Life Technique, and a single lifetime of practice is of no use to him.
The protagonist's settings are too high.
I just want to ask one question. With the protagonist's current skill configuration, if he raises his realm to the realm of immortality, will he be the opponent of the Heavenly Master who transmits the Dharma?
Even the way you cultivate is reserved for you by others, how can you fight this?
So the hang-up is not big enough, so we have to continue to open it.
[Really] The problem of foundation building.
[Huan Zhen] is beyond the world and involves the laws of time. It is definitely impossible to use it to build foundations in the early stage.
Please wait and see how the protagonist uses [Huan Zhen] to build his foundation.
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What follows are some instructions.
I am indeed a newcomer, not someone else’s vest.
So the writing style is a bit immature, so please forgive me.
I will work hard to improve myself and hope everyone can encourage me.
My job is okay, so I won’t be miserable.
Writing mostly depends on interest.
I am a part-timer and a newbie. I have to write 4,000 words for more than four hours every day. It is really difficult.
Maybe in the future, as my brain speed increases, my coding efficiency will be higher.
The so-called literature conveys the truth. There was a passage in He Zhenghao’s first lesson on cultivating immortality that day:
["Some peaks may seem towering, but in fact their destiny is over and they cannot go any further in their lifetime. Some of them are just small slopes now, but who knows that they won't grow into pillars supporting the sky in a few years?"
"Just like this small mountain at your feet, it was inconspicuous that day, but within a few decades, you can already see all the small mountains."
"Of course, most of them are just like the countless peaks under the sea of clouds. They can only serve as a foil from beginning to end, silently looking up at the mountains above the sea of clouds."
"The mountains are like this, is it suitable for people?\