: About this book
It has been almost a month since the book opened, and it has been more than 20 days. I would like to tell you about some places, and it is about the opinions of some readers.
First, it's about the Dursleys.
First of all, I know that the Dursleys are protecting Harry, but to tell the truth, for an eleven-year-old child, what the Dursleys did is really too much.
Some people say that the Dursleys raised Harry anyway, and bought him glasses to teach him how to speak, but whether you read the original book or the movie, do you think this process will be as peaceful as you think?
In ancient China, you just bought a house slave. When the house slave was young, you had to be taught by the master to talk and eat, right?
What's more, Harry grew up in an era of sound laws, and he was also concerned about human rights in England. I'm not saying that the Dursleys are evil people, but they are definitely not good people.
Who can tell me what is the difference between Harry's life in the Dursleys and his slaves? After all, the minions also have new clothes to wear during the festivals, right?
Someone said that they had love for Harry, and I laughed. Throughout the whole book, except for Penny who said that he had a bit of complicated feelings for Harry because of his blood relationship, who has love for him?
Take what love? The ragged clothes that Dudley wore? Abusive to him? Or a small cabinet that has lived for eleven years? The lock outside the room? Aunt Paige's echo of the Dursleys when they insulted Harry's parents? Or was it Vernon's greed for Harry's parents' legacy?
I never deny the opinions of readers, but you have to give examples. Let’s not express our opinions based on speculation. It’s not that I didn’t think about whitewashing them, but after reading for so long, I really couldn’t Find out what's whitewashing things for them...
And after a few spoilers, I wrote that they did change. This is a very difficult decision for me. After all, I said that I want to see more possibilities for the story.
The background of the protagonist is from an orphanage, but to be honest, I was searching for a background in the UK in the early 1990s. The children in the orphanage all had at least one set of decent clothes to wear. Does Harry have them?
If this is love, how cheap would it be? Is it cheap?
The protagonist is here to improve Harry's life, but I feel that if Sirius were to pick up Harry, it would be hard to say whether the Dursleys would still be alive.
Some people say that my writing style is too extreme, that I am too powerful for the Dursley family, that the protagonist is a bit similar to Grindelwald, I have magic and I am awesome.
But it's actually soft enough. I have magic and I'm really awesome.
Equal dialogue also needs a foundation. When you have the power of life and death in the hands of others, you expect to have an equal dialogue with others.
If it was me, I wouldn't kill them, but they don't think it's better...
Is it true? I'm so strong that you, a Muggle, is jumping around in front of me to show off your power, and the protagonist is not a respected old wizard like Dumbledore.
What's more, Dumbledore always gets mad at Aunt Petunia...
Those who are interested can browse the deeds of Dumbledore when he was young. He doesn't like Muggles as much as you think. At most, he just doesn't hate it.
So in this regard, I don't want everyone to compare this to the truth Well, just have a good time reading it. I wrote this after careful consideration.
On the other side is the issue of the heroine. I have said that I have set up an original heroine and an original heroine.
Actually, this is quite embarrassing.
Because when I wrote the original heroine, I was afraid that readers would not like it, so I thought about adding Hermione.
I was afraid that readers who hated removing the original cp would not like it, so I was wondering whether to delete a heroine Then I made a common mistake of all the compatriots in difficulty: only children make choices...
Then I emmm... After thinking about it, the two are actually pretty good. Although some people don't like harems very much, I think two should be acceptable...
The most difficult point is actually that Hermione's character limits the development of the harem to a large extent, because Hermione has always been a very strong and independent girl. It is very inconsistent for this kind of girl to write harem texts. , This is also the reason why I plan to cultivate from a young age hahahaha...
Then there are bugs in the early stage of the book, one is Nimbus 2001.
2001 was released when Harry was in his second year. This was a bug that I didn't notice at first, because 2000 was there before Harry entered school, and 2001 was an upgraded version. I always thought it was released together...
Another is that Quirrell was a Muggle professor before teaching Harry, and I've changed that.
The main thing is the above. The point of emphasis is that the protagonist is not the Virgin. If you treat me well, I will treat you well. If you quarrel with me, I will kill you. So everyone, don't think Long Aotian or something, who is it? Most people do, not to mention that the protagonist is originally a little orphan who lives on the streets of London!
The strengths of the two are not equal, and there is no equality at all. This point is for readers, and it is also some experience I learned in the past few years of work. Don't ask for equality with those who hold your lifeline...
That's all I want to say, and I hope you can support this book more in the future. There are some arrangements for the Dursley family, mainly because of the changes I want to describe. The story will start to become more exciting in the second grade. Everyone Please vote for some recommendations
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