Take a day off
Sorry_(:з ∠)_
I'm taking a day off today, not only because of intermittent Cavan's old problem, but also because something went wrong with the recent storyline.
Originally, I planned to copy the "Miwako Sato Line of Defense" section from the original work, add the character of Asai Narumi, and write a series of Metropolitan Police Department love stories.
But it seems like I'm using too much force?
I didn’t notice it when I wrote it, but I watched everyone’s reactions.
Perhaps it is because of the lack of writing power that I cannot restore the relaxed feeling of the original work. To me, this "Miwako Line of Defense" seems to have been written into the kind of disgusting "perverted group" that does not do serious work but interferes in other people's private affairs.
I originally planned to write the story of the four members of the Metropolitan Police Department as a romantic comedy.
But if the original characters such as Shiratori and Takagi were unknowingly written as "bad guys", then no matter how I construct the jokes, it will only make people feel uncomfortable.
So, I have to stop and think about it.
If it’s really not appropriate, let’s briefly touch on this branch line in the future and focus on the protagonist and his party_(:з」∠)_