Chapter 134 Discussion Outline
He Yunxiao knew that what Fan Ziruo meant when she said "it's not good to make the decision yourself" was to let him discuss it with her father Fan Changshu. In fact, this is a polite refusal.
Fan Ziruo has a conservative mind and a stable personality. In addition, she only has a favorability score of 76. He Yunxiao can understand why she does not directly agree to the proposal.
But now, what He Yunxiao doesn't understand is why the first time he accidentally told her that he was her husband, he could gain a little favorability. It won’t work the second time you hint at it.
Unable to figure it out for the moment, He Yunxiao chose to let it go for the time being.
The good news is that now, like Chu Fan, I finally have the favorability of sister Zi Ruo at 76. With this 76 favorability score alone, we can already start trying how to reduce Zi Ruo's sister's favorability score towards Chu Fan.
As long as sister Zi Ruo's favorability towards Chu Fan is lowered, she can be completely freed from Chu Xiaoxiao's clutches just like sister Du did at that time!
But now is not the time to think about this. What you should be thinking about now is how to find out the reasons for Zi Ruo's knot when teaching her to write plots.
He Yunxiao looked at Fan Zi's pretty, red face and felt that a dignified beauty had a different flavor even when she looked shy.
In order to test his heart while writing the plot outline, He Yunxiao had no choice but to destroy the beautiful scene of "beauty being shy".
"Zi Ruo."
The blush on Fan Ziruo's face had not faded yet. She heard He Yunxiao calling her and quickly responded: "Yes."
"Should we discuss novels?"
After hearing about the novel, Fan Ziruo became serious.
"Yes, the young master just said that he could sum up his story in one sentence."
After she finished speaking, she thoughtfully handed the paper with the story in front of He Yunxiao.
He Yunxiao looked at the manuscript and explained carefully: "Now, we have a clearer story line, but it is not enough. We also need an outline to expand this line."
"Does Ziruo know what an outline is?"
Fan Ziruo naturally knows that "the outline is the key point of the story."
He Yunxiao said again: "Yes! That's the key points. These key points, after being subdivided, can also be divided into setting outline, plot line outline, emotional line outline, and character outline."
He Yunxiao pointed to the first paragraph of the story on Fan Ziruo's manuscript: "Fan Zi admires her senior brother He Xiao."
Then he said: "The so-called setting outline is the outline of various settings in the story. For example, here, Fan Zi is He Xiao's junior sister. So what sect are they? What martial arts do they learn? They What are the martial arts sects in this world? ..."
Fan Zi nodded weakly to express his understanding.
Then, He Yunxiao introduced the "plot line outline", "emotional line outline" and "character outline".
And he said emphatically: "The most important thing in a love story is not the setting, but the plot and emotion. The plot needs to be plain with ups and downs, and the emotions must be logical. If the former is not good, it will make people feel boring, and the latter If it doesn’t work, it will make people feel stiff.”
Fan Ziruo nodded again to express his understanding.
Although Fan Ziruo is indeed a genius, He Yunxiao doesn't believe that she, who has never written novels, can understand how to write novels after just listening to it once.
So He Yunxiao said: "Zi Ruo, please write a plot outline for the paragraph 'Fan Zi admired her senior brother He Xiao and tried every means to "lose her virginity" to him, but unfortunately failed repeatedly." and show it to me. "
Fan Zi weakly agreed, "Okay," then took out a pen and paper and started writing.
When He Yunxiao saw her posture, he felt bad. She couldn't really write it after listening to it, right?
Geniuses really don’t make sense at all?
He Yunxiao walked behind her and looked at her handwriting on the manuscript paper.
After only two paragraphs, He Yunxiao called him a good guy.
The plot that Fan Ziruo needs to write has three key points in total. The first is "Fan Zi loves He Xiao", the second is "want to lose her virginity to him", and the third is "repeated failures".
The first plot that Fan Ziruo wrote on the manuscript paper was "Brothers and sisters go on a mission, and the hero He Xiao saves the beauty." Although the plot is old-fashioned, as long as the emotional description is in place, it is more than enough to explain the reason why "Fan Zi loves He Xiao".
Then the second plot is "He Xiao is welcomed by the sisters in the sect." The plot is very clever. It directly deepened the sense of crisis for Fan Zi, who liked He Xiao, and paved the way for her behavioral motivation to "want to lose her virginity."
After watching these two plots, He Yunxiao no longer wanted to watch them.
He knew that Fan Ziruo would definitely have no problem with plot design.
Genius is genius.
No matter what it is, just teach her once and she will be able to use it skillfully.
Is there any royal law for this? Are there any laws?
He Yunxiao just wanted to angrily complain about God's injustice, but when he thought that Zi Ruo's sister was his wife, if she was smart, the baby he would give birth to would also be smart. He Yunxiao silently gave God a thumbs up.
As if he had already thought about it, Fan Ziruo wrote very quickly. In a short while, he finished the first paragraph of the plot.
He Yunxiao looked at the manuscript paper handed to him by Fan Ziruo and had nothing to say.
In terms of plot, there is nothing particularly eye-catching about Fan Ziruo's plot, but every plot is very reasonable. That's enough.
The so-called romance novels are not about the plot, but the characters and the development of the feelings between the characters.
Fan Ziruo's plot is completely up to standard.
With her writing ability, she doesn't have to worry about not being able to describe the characters well, so for her, as long as she perfects the outline of the emotional line, she can start writing the novel.
He Yunxiao wanted to say: Ziruo, you write very well. But no, He Yunxiao had other purposes. He had to pretend to discuss the outline with Fan Ziruo and test her about her heart knot.
He Yunxiao took advantage of the gap in the outline to think about the case where Ziruo's sister had a little increase in favorability.
At that time, I accidentally put myself in the role of her husband, and then I made her a little more favorable. Later, when I put myself in the role of her husband again and tested her, my favorability did not increase.
Why did it increase the first time, but not the next time?
Could it be that the reason for the increase in favorability was actually my attitude as her husband, rather than my love words to her?
When her husband's attitude can only appear once, and love words can be said many times, so when she knows my attitude, I can't repeat this thing again, so the favorability can only increase once. When I tried it again, it didn't work.
But why did she feel more favorable towards me because I wanted to marry her?
Did she agree that I wouldn't marry her?
Why did she think so?
He Yunxiao didn't understand, so he had to focus on Fan Ziruo's plot outline again.
In the plot outline, there is a plot that says "He Xiao rejected Fan Zi who threw herself at him because he felt that she was more than just a junior sister."
He Yunxiao couldn't figure it out, so he asked Fan Ziruo: "Ziruo, why did He Xiao reject Fan Zi here?"
Fan Ziruo looked at the manuscript and explained: "Because although Fan Zi is a junior sister, Fan Zi's father and He Xiao are close friends."
He Yunxiao understood that the reason He Xiao rejected Fan Zi was because of ethics. Simply put, Fan Zi is the daughter of He Xiao's brother, so how could he do that?
The more He Yunxiao thought about it, the more he felt something was wrong.
Since He Xiao does not accept Fan Zi because of ethics, then Fan Ziruo, as an author, has this kind of thought. Is it possible that she does not accept me because of ethics?
It is entirely possible!
No wonder her favorability increased after she knew my attitude of "wanting to marry her". No matter how she brushed the favorability before, it would not increase. It turned out that she had never encountered the "teacher-student" line before, and she never dared to think about it!
Fan Ziruo attaches the most importance to these things. She is both my teacher and my student. Under such a complicated relationship, it is normal for her to have concerns.
He Yunxiao thought about the first time he met Fan Ziruo. At that time, he had to destroy the teacher-student relationship with Fan Ziruo and become her teacher because he was afraid of the current situation.
Unexpectedly, it still happened.
However, now that the reason for the knot is known, it will be much easier to solve it.