Questions about the plot and some of your guesses and criticisms

Questions about the plot and some of your guesses and criticisms

Seriously, I'm a bit lost right now.

When I was writing the outline, I thought, if I write it this way, it will be too procrastinated, causing the front to be full of daily life, and the golden finger will appear too late.

Later, I really couldn't think of any good way, so I wrote it first.

Sure enough, some people think it's watery, some people think the progress is too slow, saying how many chapters have passed, the protagonist will only pretend to be 13 with children, and some people think it's boring to watch too much everyday.

No way, delete the plot and improve the rhythm.

Many daily routines that have been planned are directly cut off, or they are simply wiped off, and then transition to the Five Kages War as soon as possible.

Originally, the outline was designed to focus on the daily life with Madara, the daily confrontation with Heijue, etc. after being taken away by Madara.

Then edit the notification, it's time to go live.

No. 1 or No. 5.

At that time, there were not many manuscripts in hand, and I was tossed to death by worrying things every day, and then there was the plane in the afternoon of the 1st.

Forget it, what are you talking about.

In short, it was quite sudden at the time, and in the next few days, there was no way to calm down and code words, so I simply pushed it to the 5th, and there were a few more days of buffer time.

Some people have said that other people's shelves are all high-level C plots. You are in the transition, who likes to watch it?

That’s right, I had two options at the time, either bite the bullet and write the daily routine according to the outline, or delete it all, continue to speed up the pace, and directly write the plot of the protagonist as an adult.

I chose the latter, but I just didn’t want to be called water when it was put on the shelves.

In the end, I still didn’t run away, because the transitional plot looks like water, but you still have to write it.

For example, Madara's attitude has to be explained, and it probably taught the protagonist what to explain, when Madara's reincarnation eyes opened, and how to solve the hidden dangers of the protagonist's body.

If you say less, there will be a lot of people questioning you, what is going on here, you have a BUG.

If you talk too much, you will become rambunctious. It looks like it has no nutrition at all, it is commonly known as water.

After all this has passed, in order to continue the following plot, there must be a foreshadowing, and from time to time, I have to explain what happened and what changes have occurred in these years.

I also don’t want to write these things, but I can’t do it without writing. If I don’t explain anything, how will I write it later?

Then it became what it is now, writing about daily life and talking about water. Don't write about daily life anymore, it's also water.

Although I had some psychological preparation when I wrote the outline, it was still quite uncomfortable.

It's not because of you, but because of me. I don't have enough writing skills to write some unimportant plots concisely and concisely, and I don't have enough control over the rhythm.

Regarding this point, it was my fault that I had to stand at attention when I was beaten.

But some people said that I deliberately wrote the water, and ran away when I was going to catch a wave, or I wrote it with a different person. Is it a bit too vicious?

If you don't write well, your grades will be poor. Do you work hard to code words just to earn a few meals?

This book is not a buyout, so what's the point of finding a ghostwriter?

To make a digression, more than once someone asked me to write buyout articles on other websites. It may not be a lot, but at least it is guaranteed.

However, Old Faceless is more or less a pursuing person, plus he is a bit nostalgic and finds it bothersome, so let it go.

So if it's really bad money, why don't I write a buyout article? Why didn't you continue to write the last book when the seven thousand balance was set, but chose to end it directly?

To put it bluntly, go to any world and write hundreds of chapters, what money do you have?

At that time, more than half of the book friends in the group supported Lao Wuface to continue writing and go to other worlds to die.

But at that time, Lao WuMian thought a lot, and felt that ending directly in Naruto World was the best ending, and it was also a best explanation for himself and all readers.

So opinions can be raised, and I think water doesn't matter, but I really don't want to intentionally use the word "water".

Having said that, let's talk about the plot.

Some people say that nothing has changed in the past ten years of jumping in the middle, it is to force the protagonist to post back to the original plot, and ask why not directly fast forward to Shippuden.

I want to say that when the protagonist was young, some people thought it was too small and had no sense of substitution.

Many people feel that the pace is slow and they are tired of watching daily routines, so they deleted about dozens of daily routines of He Madara and others in the middle. This is the reason why you think it is fast.

If I write the deleted paragraph, I will be sprayed with water in a different way, so it doesn't matter.

As for forcibly posting back to the original plot and fast forwarding to Shippuden, I don't know if I'm crazy or you are crazy.

Let me tell you this, there is no such thing as Shippuden in my outline!

Can you tell me where did you post the original plot?

As for the results of the Uzumaki Clan, I have already left a foreshadowing, and there are even other foreshadowings that have not been revealed.

When the protagonist doesn't come out to make trouble, I can't forcefully change the plot too much, can I?

Some people say that what was written above is to let the protagonist return to Konoha, and then what

I'm also really...drunk.

People are targeted in various ways, and then they lick their faces and return to Konoha to lead everyone to live a well-off life. Isn't it cheap?

Still as Hokage

From the moment the protagonist is taken away by Madara, Hokage has nothing to do with the protagonist.

The only thing someone said was right was that Sarutobi Hiruzen was disgusting!

Because that's how I designed it.

Regardless of what Kishimoto defines Sarutobi in the original book, as far as I am concerned, Sarutobi is a hypocritical and scheming guy.

It seems that Danzo is the worst, but how much of Danzo is actually blamed for Sarutobi?

How many things that Sarutobi could not do were explicitly or implicitly handed over to Danzo, and then he pretended to be wronged and angry afterwards?

He kept saying that he died for Konoha, even with honor.

What the hell, it's that simple!

It's a miracle that Naruto didn't turn black, it's all AB's fault!

So in this book, if you want to see that Sarutobi is a good person, you can just click X and leave.

The protagonists will be Danzo and Sarutobi!

In addition to personal senses, this design is also to give enough motivation and explanation to the protagonist's subsequent choices.

There is also the part about going to the Land of Rain, some people feel that the protagonist did nothing but glance at Nagato, and then took two pictures.

I feel so wronged.

This piece has several functions. One is to use the perspective of Nagato and the others to describe what stage the war has entered at this time.

The second is to let the protagonist, Xiaolu, tell everyone that the protagonist is already very good, and by the way, gain the admiration of Langmen and others.

In the original book, Nagato and the others decided to catch up to apprentice because they saw Jiraiya's battle.

Therefore, designing such a foreshadowing is also convenient for the protagonist to come back to accept the younger brother.

Three, all the descriptions of the current tragedy of the Kingdom of Rain, and those descriptions that the main character of the Kingdom of Rain can exert stronger power in Water Dungeon, are all foreshadowing!

This piece will determine the next choice of the protagonist.

Fourth, give Madara a reasonable time to make troubles, so as to lead Kagami to the protagonist, and then notify Danzo at the same time, and start to intensify the conflict.

When I was designing this plot, I still felt that I was very good at it. Many problems were solved at once, and I could also let the protagonist pretend to be a wave.

Then it became just to see Nagato, so I bought two cards by the way, what the hell am I

Forget it, I wrote it so long all at once, and I don’t know if anyone will read it.

Now I don't even know how to write it so that I don't know how to write it.

What's more interesting is that now someone came out to say that it was well written before it was put on the shelves, but it didn't taste that good after it was put on the shelves.

I just wanted to say, what did you do early?

If you stood up and said that the original writing was good and the rhythm was good, would I have deleted the outline and changed the plot in a panic?

With that said, it seems like I'm throwing the blame again.

Really, I can't get rid of this problem for a long time. Every time I read the comments, I feel relieved, and I can't fall asleep thinking about it over and over again.

Obviously, every time I know that it is difficult to agree with each other, there are always two people who make opposite suggestions, who should I listen to? I can't help but doubt myself, thinking that it may be my own problem, and I have to change it!

In the end, the two were not happy, and only I deserved it!

Alright, fast forward and fast forward, let’s write it down like this, the next thing is the plot where the protagonist really starts to rise and the golden finger that delays things should also show his face.

I don't even read the comments.

I have explained everything I can explain about whether there is water or not, and there is nothing to say.

Then it's time to write, write. It's time to read, read.

It is impossible to be a eunuch, at least these things designed in the outline will be written later.

It may have disappointed some book friends and failed to meet expectations. If there is a chance, I hope to see you again.

Finally, to sum up, thousands of mistakes are all my fault. I am guilty of writing spicy chicken and water.

Please be merciful, the comment area is so smoky these days that I can't read it.

It has been hung up for several days, and now I have someone delete the head office, right?

If you insist that I am a critic, then I will admit it.

Otherwise, when the newcomer saw the enthusiasm of the big guy, he would turn his head and run away, for fear of being caught and kicked his pants on the ground for an injection.

2020.11.12

The humble old faceless man who was beaten to attention