Complete remarks
From the very beginning of this book, I had already thought about the ending, the pit that the main plot would dig and how to fill it, but unfortunately, it got lost in the middle. (Actually, I originally thought my main line setting was okay)
After finishing this book, summarize the lessons learned:
1. Whatever the style of the novel is at the beginning, it must be strictly continued. You cannot change the style blindly because you are afraid that the routine will become old.
I just felt that this book was too rambling for players to write about, and it was pointless to repeat the fun jokes. I just thought of switching to traditional fantasy in the middle, and the summoned player would serve as a cheat. Now it seems that I am still too young. It is better for a novel to start from the beginning.
2. Character design issues, especially the protagonist’s character design.
In fact, the main characters of my book were designed at the beginning, such as children, dog gods, Brother Ba and other important characters. I designed their own way of speaking and doing things, but I forgot about the protagonist. Because I just wanted the protagonist to be a tool from the beginning, all his actions were for fun plot purposes, which led to the protagonist’s changeable personality and unhealthy outlook on life (actually, I wrote this on purpose in some places, because His soul is incomplete and he wants to dig a hole, but the readers don’t know, so they keep digging and stop reading.)
There are still some minor issues, so I won’t go into details. After all, there is still a lot to gain from writing the first book.
I'm a little confused about what book to open next, and I have two ideas in mind:
The first idea is an anti-routine entertainment article. Similar to this book, the protagonist summons some trainees (players) from the earth through a strange website in a city in parallel time and space. These trainees send the protagonist to where he is. The world has been treated as a star game, so it is not afraid of anything. It has also transplanted songs and movies from the earth, so the protagonist's entertainment company has become more and more popular, bigger and stronger.
The second idea is a Dihua type fantasy. The protagonist travels through time with the [Skin Mall]. This system cannot give the protagonist any substantial help. The protagonist can only draw skins in this system. For example, when testing talents, I drew a super genius skin. After equipping this skin, the protagonist's talents are still rubbish, but others think he is a genius. In the same way, there are high-strength skins. His own strength has not changed, but others think he is a master. In the mid-term, there may be some skins that change the character. After the protagonist wears the equipment, he will become a different person.
Readers who are lucky enough to see it here can leave a message to help me make a choice. If you like the first idea, deduct 1, if you like the second idea, deduct 2, and if you don't like either, deduct 0. Thanks!
Also, don’t ask me why I finished the book so quickly. If you ask me, I’m just poor and starving to death!