Chapter 505 The Holy Son enlightens and makes another breakthrough!
"Have you watched Douyin? I heard that this year's essay was so terrible that many students were crying online."
When Lao Mo was watching TV with Xiao Doudou on the sofa, Che Shujun walked over with the fruit, put it on the coffee table, and answered him with a smile.
"How terrible can the composition be? It's still the same score whether it's OK or not." Old Mo disagreed.
Che Shujun was a Chinese teacher before, so she was a little unconvinced when she heard this, so she handed him the question directly: "You have also passed the college entrance examination. Come on, let's see how to write this."
Lao Mo thought that he was also a serious top student, so he took the phone directly without thinking, but when he saw the title of the essay, his brows suddenly wrinkled...
Then, with a serious look on his face, he defended himself and said, "I have never seen "Dream of Red Mansions"."
"What does this have to do with "Dream of Red Mansions"?" Teacher Che Shujun said with a smile, "Look, if it were you, you would probably write off the mark."
"It's been so many years since I graduated, I just forgot..."
Even though he said this, Lao Mo had to admit that he didn't understand.
As a pure science student, he really has no place to start with this topic.
So, he clicked on the comment area.
Xin Yun: When I saw the title of this essay, my hands started to shake and my heart beat faster. Damn, luckily I am already a freshman.
"Haha, that's quite funny." This comment made Lao Mo laugh.
Then, continue looking below.
Zixi SaMa: No, what the hell is this? Not everyone has watched "Dream of Red Mansions". What was in the mind of the person who asked the question?
Ah, the same words as myself.
Hey, Gulu, haha: After reading "Dream of Red Mansions", I don't know how to write it. I have to reread it now that Cao Xueqin is here.
See if you can fly: Jia Baoyu never thought that he would be scolded by candidates for this matter hundreds of years later
Fighting turns and the stars change: Hey, this forced exam allowed me, a kid from the mountains, to be successfully sent to the mountains.
"It feels like the kids who took the college entrance examination this year are going to collapse." Lao Mo became more and more funny as he watched.
"If this were your class, you wouldn't be able to laugh." Che Shujun said.
"Indeed, I already had a premonition of how those brats would make excuses." Lao Mo looked at Che Shujun and asked curiously, "Then how should I write it?"
"Well..." Che Shujun thought for a while and said, "It's very simple, just learn from and innovate, and then criticize the reference that is not based on actual practice and promote the significance of innovation."
"Is there only one direction?"
"Well, this question was actually pretty bad."
Talking about this, Che Shujun commented with her personal understanding: "It seems to be very cultural and combined with traditional literature, but in fact the application is quite superficial. Moreover, there is actually no place for thinking, and it is directly covered For those who live in the front, just read the last sentence.”
"Then if you don't write in this direction, it will be regarded as off topic?"
"Yeah." Che Shujun said with an awkward smile, "Actually, anyone who has read the original work knows that what I want to say in that paragraph is 'human relations'. Therefore, children who have read "A Dream of Red Mansions" will be disturbed in their judgment. ”
"That's okay, the students in our class definitely won't read it."
Lao Mo was relieved immediately.
"Do you want to talk to Chen Yuan about college entrance examination Chinese?" Che Shujun suggested.
"I'm a math teacher, how can I talk to him about Chinese?"
"Just ask him what he thinks?" Che Shujun was very curious. After all, she had never taught such a good student and wanted to know how good children solved the problems.
"this……"
Just when Lao Mo was hesitating, a message was sent.
After he clicked it, he found it was Chen Yuan.
Chen Yuan: Teacher, after I came up with the topic, I wrote an essay and also wrote my thoughts. I want the Chinese teacher in our school to judge the paper.
"Oh my god, didn't this just come out?" Che Shujun was a little shocked, "Are all smart kids like this? Starting to write essays without even eating?"
"Only Chen Yuan would be like this."
A satisfied smile appeared on Lao Mo's lips.
So he replied: Then you send it to me and I will let the school teachers judge it.
Chen Yuan: Excuse me.
Then, a few photos were sent.
After Lao Mo made it clear to Liu Fang, he asked her to judge the papers, and also asked her to let other teachers in the Chinese language group take a look.
After sending the message, Che Shujun also took the phone and nodded while eating the cherry: "Well, the roll call should be brief."
"Aren't you off topic?" Lao Mo asked concerned.
"It's basic for a student like this to stay on topic," Che Shujun said with a smile. "Moreover, he sublimated it very well and found a very good angle. It's really good. The pattern is so big all of a sudden. As a Science students are so rare.”
"After all, it's Chen Yuan. If he can't write well, then no one in No. 11 High School can write well." Lao Mo smiled a little proudly.
"Don't be too proud either."
At this time, Che Shujun also suppressed a little and said: "The content and relevance are good, and the literary talent is also good, but there is still a certain gap between the high scores. In my words, I should only give 52 points."
"Ah?" Because Chen Yuan has been praised all the time, now there is a turn that makes Lao Mo a little uncomfortable, "But isn't it quite high?"
"Of course, this score is very high." Che Shujun agreed, but if it was Chen Yuan, she felt that the requirements should be higher, so she said, "But after all, Chen Yuan."
"I remember that he was 57 in composition before, so this time his performance is average."
This is what Lao Mo thought.
"But after all, I have never taught high school, so I still have to see what the high school teachers think." Che Shujun said, "Anyway, it must be a good composition."
Good composition is indeed good composition.
But it also shows that the current Chen Yuan does not have the strength to be the top scorer in the college entrance examination.
………
"Is it innovation?" Xia Xinyu asked nervously.
"Yes." Chen Yuan said.
"That's okay, as long as there are no deviations from the topic." Xia Xinyu breathed a sigh of relief.
"But I have a hunch that many people will stray from the topic." Chen Yuan said, "For example, they will bias towards choice, and bias towards a thousand Harry Potters in the eyes of a thousand people."
"...Is it Hamlet?"
"Ahem." Chen Yuan changed the topic, "But if it really goes off topic, the essay will be worth 36 points."
"This is a devastating blow to many people..."
"A score of 36 is still a prerequisite for a good score. If you are not very good at ordinary times, you might get a score of 32, which will directly ruin your college dream."
Chen Yuan has already thought about how many students near the undergraduate level will be completely GG this year because of their failure in the Chinese subject.
The proportion of students who go off topic is definitely not low.
Once the composition goes off topic, it will be sent directly.
"It took me a long time just to think about this question, but after the final review, I found that the previous materials were basically useless. Just read the last sentence." Xia Xinyu said happily.
"How was the writing?" Chen Yuan asked.
"I think it's still possible." Xia Xinyu is quite optimistic. After all, it's not difficult.
"Okay, let's order first."
Just like that, after finishing their composition on an hungry stomach, the two of them ordered takeout.
While waiting for the takeout, Lao Mo sent a message.
The two of them just looked at each other with great concern.
Lao Mo: This is the score after discussion by several teachers. I will send the comments to you later.
Lao Mo: Chen Yuan, 52 points. Xia Xinyu, 49 points.
Seeing these two scores, the expressions of both people were quite calm.
It seemed to be expected.
But, they are not satisfied.
Low.
"Baby, there's still a long way between me and the top pick." Chen Yuan looked at Xia Xinyu and said.
"Baby, there is a big gap between me and Huaqing Ji." Xia Xinyu also looked at Chen Yuan and muttered with a slight disappointment.
This battle also made the two of them realize that if it were them who took the college entrance examination this year, it would be difficult to get a high score in Chinese based on their current level.
"No." Chen Yuan shook his fist slightly and said firmly, "The composition must be strengthened."
"The next final is also the city's unified examination, and I guess the questions will be modeled on the college entrance examination essays. For the next exam, I think we have to focus on this type of essay..."
"No." Chen Yuan raised his hand and said, "I understand clearly. Next year's college entrance examination, 95% of the essays will be the main theme composition."
"Is this the main theme?" Xia Xinyu asked.
"In fact, the direction of guidance is the main theme. It can be said that all current compositions and all propositions can be based on it."
It was decided that Chen Yuan would keep one hand for next year.
"Then let's start practicing from now on. Choose a sample essay template, accumulate materials, and try to write this kind of essay to the best possible extent." Xia Xinyu was willing to believe Chen Yuan.
"Well, from now until before the college entrance examination, we will practice this essay."
Chen Yuan has already thought clearly about formulating a series of examination essays.
He has also read the college entrance examination full score essays in recent years. Very few of them have their own connotations and meanings. Most of them are empty shells after careful consideration. But you must know that in a very short period of time, the marking teacher is appreciative. What can't be understood is the structure, the idea, the flashy prose, and the random allusions and golden sentences.
"Come on Xin Bao."
Chen Yuan stretched out his fist.
"You too." Xia Xinyu also stretched out her fist and touched it lightly.
Both of them understood each other's shortcomings under the 'blow'.
Chen Yuan, on the other hand, was a little curious: "I wonder how those opponents will perform..."
………
After Shi Yi wrote the composition, he sent it to the Chinese teacher and then waited in the study.
Composition has never been something he is very good at.
But he still has great experience in writing Chinese language topics.
So basically his Chinese scores are very stable.
In fact, he also tried, should he attack the Chinese language and rush to 140?
Then gave up.
For him, getting 450 in comprehensive science and mathematics is the ultimate goal.
He even thinks 450 is less difficult than 140.
After a while, the Chinese teacher sent:
I have discussed it with several Chinese teachers. As for the final score, there is not much difference. We all agree that 52 and 53 are about the same.
Can.
This score is completely acceptable to Shi Yi.
In fact, his Chinese studies only include composition and reading.
So if this is the case, the overall score in Chinese should not be weak.
Everyone has limits.
Shi Yi knew that he would never be able to get 146 in Chinese like the scholar from Jingbei.
But he was confident that he could surpass her in total points.
725 points…
Still 3 points away.
In the remaining year, his goal is to increase by another 3 points.
And if it is this score, he can win the provincial champion in any year within the last 15 years.
The harder he was chased, the clearer Shi Yi became. That is, only by approaching the human limit infinitely can we win against those two people.
If they reach the limit of human beings, they still lose.
Then it is not your own fault...
…
: We discussed it, and we discussed it with all the teachers who have participated in the college entrance examination marking, and we think it should be above 58 points.
: However, your essay is no worse than the full-score essays of the past few years.
: So, don’t pay too much attention to this score. In other words, such an article with beautiful handwriting and no typos is very good.
Looking at the Chinese teacher's comments, Liu Chengxi leaned on the chair and smiled lightly.
I didn't feel particularly excited.
But not as crazy as expected.
But now he finally understands why the top candidates only compare Chinese.
At least for me, Chinese language is a vast blue ocean.
Ever since she got the benefit of the last 13-school joint entrance examination, Liu Chengxi began to think about composition and perfect score composition.
Then, he also started practicing seriously.
During a monthly exam, his composition score was also very good, with a score of 56.
But this time, it was higher.
Just as he was thinking, the door was suddenly pushed open: "Xibao, eat melon~"
"?!" Liu Chengxi was suddenly frightened and her body tensed up, "You, why did you come in?"
At this time, Shen Yating was wearing short-sleeved shorts, looking very casual, and holding a plate of cut watermelon in her hand.
"Auntie cut the melon, so she helped bring it in." Shen Yating went directly to his side, inserted a piece of melon with a toothpick, and handed it to his mouth, "Xibao, ah~"
After Liu Chengxi finished eating, she complained weakly: "Come here, my mother didn't even say hello to me..."
And just like my mother, she never knocks on the door!
"We are all a family, what do you say hello to?"
Shen Yating smiled and sat on Liu Chengxi's lap. Then she looked at the composition paper on the table and said in surprise: "Are you also writing a composition? Have you shown it to the teacher?"
"After you sent out the questions, I started writing them and have already shown them to the teacher."
Looking at Shen Yating sitting naturally on his lap, Liu Chengxi's cheeks turned slightly red and he gently hugged her waist...
"The topic of this essay was really outrageous. I seriously doubted that the person who wrote the question had never read "Dream of Red Mansions", so I almost got asked... Fortunately, the question was clear, so I still scored 50 points."
As Shen Yating spoke, she looked at Liu Chengxi's composition, and then her eyes gradually brightened: "Wow, isn't this writing so literate? It all quotes from classics and classics, and it is a eloquent talk."
"...Why did you use a derogatory term?"
"That's great. What did the teacher say? The score must be very high, right?"
Shen Yating turned around, looked at Liu Chengxi and asked.
Then, Liu Chengxi handed her the phone to look at.
"Hey, doesn't this mean perfect score for the composition?!" Shen Yating was dumbfounded.
How could Liu Chengxi, who had never been good at Chinese before, improve to this level?
Moreover, the teachers in No. 1 Middle School are all college entrance examination examiners. They give such scores, indicating that they are worth such a score.
If this is the case, doesn't it mean that not only will I be surpassed by him, but I will also be surpassed fiercely...
"Absolutely." Liu Chengxi remained calm.
"Why are you so calm?"
Turning around completely, rubbing against Liu Chengxi's body, and then grabbing his waist, Shen Yating asked eagerly: "Did you sign up for some class and suddenly performed so well?"
"Is it strong..."
"Just the first sentence... I've never heard of it."
"You don't care too much about current affairs."
"What's going on with that line of poetry? We've definitely never learned it. Also, how do you know the ancient allusions that fit the subject so well?" Shen Yating was curious.
So, Liu Chengxi opened an app on her phone and handed it to her: "Just swipe it every day. It can satisfy most writing materials."
"What the hell, do you want to advertise?"
The puzzled Shen Yating saw the software on her phone and was dumbfounded: "Isn't this the 'Youth Study' that makes college students so worried?"
Liu Chengxi’s method of learning is so partial!
"Why do I think it's quite interesting?" Liu Chengxi said.
"You relied on this to get a perfect score?" Shen Yating continued to be shocked.
"I gradually discovered that compositions can basically be written in this aspect. In this case, if you want to expand your material, this software is very suitable."
Liu Chengxi even thought everyone was watching this.
"Indeed, I never thought that answering questions every day is the process of accumulating materials!" Shen Yating suddenly realized.
"I see that many people use this to write essays, and it actually helps a lot in their essays."
"I learned it." Shen Yating benefited a lot and praised, "You are really strong."
To defeat Shi Yi, get rid of Chen Yuan's pursuit, and get the perfect score for the composition, this is undoubtedly a trick.
"I just hope that the essay will come out as I imagined."
Anyway, Liu Chengxi feels that next year's college entrance examination should also be in this direction.
"Yeah, our Xibao is awesome, let's give it a reward." Shen Yating pursed her lips and couldn't help but talk.
After all, coming to him to talk about studying is secondary. The primary purpose is of course a good kiss...
And Liu Chengxi will naturally not refuse...
Still looking forward to it.
Just like that, waiting for the lips to come closer.
"Cheng Xi, finish eating the melon..."
Cheng Xi's mother habitually opened the door and gave me melons.
Then, he saw Yating sitting on her son's lap, grabbing her waist, closing her eyes and approaching sideways...
"sorry!!!"