Chapter 103: About Writing (Additional chapter for the leader
Regarding Chu Xiaoxiao's martial arts, He Yunxiao explained to Fan Ziruo tactfully: "Chu Xiaoxiao actually knows a little martial arts and is quite powerful. Most people can't beat her."
Regarding Chu Xiaoxiao's changing personality, He Yunxiao vividly explained: "She only likes Chu Fan and will not look good on others. Therefore, when she leaves Chu Fan, she seems to be a different person. You understand ?"
"Anyway, that's what happened. I'm helping a little girl who knows martial arts chase her brother."
He Yunxiao's summary is quite accurate, although many dispensable details have been deleted, such as the difference between "knowing a little martial arts" and "knowing hundreds of millions of martial arts", as well as the existence of the two personalities "Xiaoxiao" and "Chuchu". There is also the clever summary of "helping her deal with bad women" in "helping her chase her brother".
Fan Ziruo, who didn't like Chu Xiaoxiao at first, looked at her with new eyes after hearing that she actually liked Chu Fan instead of He Yunxiao.
"Miss Xiaoxiao, she is a good girl who dares to love and hate."
He Yunxiao responded: "That's right. That's right. Zi Ruo, when you see her again, you must treat her as usual. Don't reveal your secret."
Fan Zi said weakly: "She dares to like her brother and risk the world's disapproval. Such courage is something I should respect."
He Yunxiao wiped the cold sweat from his forehead.
Turtle, your respect for her is equivalent to telling her "I know your secret". Does this mean you dislike your life for not being long enough?
"Don't, don't, don't. Her relationship itself is controversial. The more you respect her, the more pressure you put on her. Let's pretend not to see it, help in secret, and let this relationship take its course. If Chu Ruochu Xiaoxiao's feelings are strong, but Chu Fan doesn't like her, so your respect for her will be the last stone to hit Chu Xiaoxiao. "
Hearing what He Yunxiao said, Fan Ziruo understood his mistake, so he stood up and thanked He Yunxiao: "Thank you, Master, for reminding me. Ziruo was not considerate enough and almost did something bad with good intentions."
Seeing that Fan Ziruo agreed to treat Chu Xiaoxiao as normal from now on, He Yunxiao finally breathed a sigh of relief. Chu Xiaoxiao's abnormal personality has been explained at least.
After turning the page at this time, the topic quickly returned to the right track: how to write a good martial arts novel.
He Yunxiao took out the novel and manuscript papers that he had put away in the morning to avoid Chu Xiaoxiao, and handed them all to Fan Ziruo.
"Zi Ruo, here are some martial arts novels I found at home. You can read them first."
Fan Ziruo took the novel from He Fu's study, opened it, and then changed it to another one and opened it again. Then the above operation was repeated twice more.
She smiled and said: "Sir, I have read all these books."
He Yunxiao's face darkened.
Seen? Have you seen it before and can you still write it like that?
Seeing He Yunxiao's expressionless face, Fan Ziruo said with a guilty conscience: "Sir, is Ziruo not very smart?"
He Yunxiao was thinking about how to teach Fan Ziruo to write a book, and subconsciously said: "No, you may just have a different brain than others."
Fan Ziruo: "Huh?"
He Yunxiao realized that he had made a mistake, and then he remembered that this was what he often said when typing on the keyboard in his previous life.
So he quickly explained: "What I mean is that there is a big difference between the story you think about, the story you finally express in words, and the story the reader understands after reading it."
Fan Zi said weakly: "Then what should I do?"
He Yunxiao didn't know what to do. He has not studied screenwriting systematically and does not understand many theories. I understand, but I only understand a little bit, so I am a "mud-legged" writer.
In fact, most writers who write online articles are like him, and no one has systematically learned this knowledge. They all grow along the way through constant trial and error and constant jumping on the street.
He Yunxiao confirmed to Fan Ziruo again: "Ziruo, do you really want to write the kind of novel that everyone loves to read?"
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao and nodded solemnly. For her, it is important to write that she is happy, but being recognized by the people she cares about is ten thousand times happier than entertaining herself.
Zi Ruo wants to write a novel that Mr. He also likes to read!
Seeing how determined she was, He Yunxiao no longer doubted her determination.
He couldn't write a world-famous novel, nor could he teach it, but He Yunxiao was completely confident that he could just write a popular novel that the common people would love to read.
Although in my previous life I was just a small gangster, now I am in Qi, a country where all kinds of entertainment products are quite scarce!
If I can't write something worthy of my name, how can I be worthy of the tens of millions of online readers in my previous life, and how can I be worthy of the countless fellow writers who were swept to death in my previous life!
Although he is invincible in the key, he dares to hold the brush and sweep across Kyushu!
Fan Ziruo watched helplessly as He Yunxiao completed the transformation of his temperament, like a dandy who took off his brocade robe overnight, put on armor, rode alone, holding a long spear, and fought against thousands of people. In front of the military formation.
[Fan Ziruo’s favorability level changed from 75 to 75]
"Zi Rui, if you want to write a novel that everyone loves to read, what is the most important thing? Do you know?"
"have no idea."
He Yunxiao looked at her and smiled: "The most important thing is actually to let go of your pride."
Fan Ziruo frowned, as if he understood, but also seemed not to understand.
He Yunxiao didn't force her to understand. Just saying this and not understanding it is normal.
He took out the manuscript paper and divided it into two halves. Half of them were handed to Fan Ziruo and said: "Ziruo, the novels I brought you have been read by both of us. One of them is about 'Joining the Su Family', do you remember it?"
Fan Ziruo nodded and said, "I remember. It's called "The Record of Taihu Swordsmen."
He Yunxiao said, "That's right. Let's give this novel a new name now, and then go find Sister Du and the other maids in the mansion to see whose novel they are more interested in."
Fan Ziruo didn't know what He Yunxiao meant by this, but she didn't ask much, just did what he told her to do.
Thinking that she couldn't be looked down upon by the young master, she carefully recalled the content of the novel, and then continued to refine and sublimate the main theme of the novel.
Finally, after thinking for a full quarter of an hour, Fan Ziruo wrote down her new name - "Qingping".
On the other hand, He Yunxiao had finished writing it early, and he had nothing to do and kept holding his chin to secretly look at Fan Ziruo's pretty face frowning and thinking.
He Yunxiao sighed in his heart: The heroine is the heroine. Whether it's Chu Xiaoxiao, Du Yinyun, or Fan Ziruo who is right in front of him. They are not just beautiful, but stunning at first sight, and more and more beautiful at second, third, and fourth glances. The most important thing is that they are beautiful in their own way, not the same beauty.
It really makes people wonder how this face is grown.
It is simply perfect in He Yunxiao's aesthetics.
Fan Ziruo thought of a name, and said to He Yunxiao: "Sir, have you thought of it?"
He Yunxiao smiled and said: "Of course. Ziruo want to see it?"
"Yes."
He Yunxiao was not vague, and pushed the manuscript with the name written on it in front of Fan Ziruo on the spot.
On the manuscript, it was written:
"The Son-in-law: Defeating the Martial Arts Alliance Leader with One Move".