Chapter 104: On the Advantages of Online Literature
Fan Ziruo stared blankly at the title written by He Yunxiao, and was a little unresponsive for a while.
Why can a colon appear in a book title?
Can the title of a book be written in vernacular?
Defeating the leader of the martial arts world only occupies a small part of the book. Can this also be used as a title?
Fan Ziruo looked at the title written by He Yunxiao, and then looked at the title of her own book, "Qingping".
Although she still thought that "Qingping" was better, looking at He Yunxiao's, she suddenly had an urge to open the book and read it again, even though she had read it several times and remembered many plots in the book, but she just wanted to open the book and read it suddenly.
He Yunxiao saw her expression and knew that the purpose had been achieved, so he said: "Ziruo, a bystander can see clearly, how about we ask Miss Du to take a look?"
Fan Ziruo, who was full of confidence just now, was a little unconfident at this time, and she said: "Okay."
Fan Ziruo held two pieces of manuscript paper with the title of the book in her hand, and went to Du Yinyun's residence side by side with He Yunxiao.
Sister Du was still the same, playing the piano, reading, and embroidering all day. She would only occupy Fan Ziruo for a while and talk to her good sister when He Yunxiao was not around.
She had already finished one embroidered handkerchief for Fan Ziruo, and was still embroidering the second one.
The embroidery style was specially chosen to match her sister's temperament with "lotus after rain".
However, judging from the pattern Du Yinyun was embroidering, this "lotus after rain" only had "lotus" but no "rain".
As smart as she was, she would not miss the "rain". On the contrary, the "lotus after rain" without rain was the real stroke of genius.
Du Yinyun moved a chair and sat under the eaves. On the stool next to her was a bamboo basket, which contained all kinds of needles and threads needed for embroidery.
She was embroidering lotus in her hands, with an unconcealable smile on her lips.
I really want to see what my sister looks like when it rains...
After all, she is "Yuhe"...
Fan Ziruo led He Yunxiao to Du Yinyun's residence, and stood a little further away, and called out, "Yinyun."
Du Yinyun heard Fan Ziruo calling her, and was about to stand up and tease Sister Fan, but before she could open her mouth, she saw He Yunxiao next to Fan Ziruo.
Sister Du always put her good son at the top of her heart, thinking about him in her dreams, and she would never forget his words.
Seeing He Yunxiao was there, she put away her plan to play with Fan Ziruo, and her temperament became cold. Put down the needlework, stand up and salute He Yunxiao slightly. There is a natural sense of distance called "coldness" in every gesture.
She bowed lightly, "Mr. He."
He Yunxiao bowed and returned the greeting, "Ms. Du, we meet again."
Seeing the atmosphere like this, Fan Ziruo stood between the two "distant" people and explained to He Yunxiao, "Mr., my sister is a little indifferent. She is like this to everyone, neither cold nor warm. Don't take it to heart."
He Yunxiao: "Indifferent Temperament".
Du Yinyun: Why did my sister also call me "Mr."? It was obviously me who called her first.
He Yunxiao replied to Fan Ziruo, "It's okay, it's okay. I've heard about Miss Du's personality a long time ago."
He Yunxiao deliberately didn't mention "I met her at Chunfeng Tower" to get close to her. First, he didn't need to get close to Miss Du. Second, Chunfeng Tower was not a good memory. It was a bit sick to talk about other people's sad things for no reason.
Fan Ziruo quickly got to the point. She handed two manuscripts with the title of the book to Du Yinyun.
"Yinyun, here are two books. If you look at the titles alone, which one do you like? Which one do you want to read?"
Du Yinyun looked at the titles of the two books in her hand, and then looked up at Fan Ziruo and He Yunxiao. Then she pointed at "Qingping" and said, "I like this one."
Du Yinyun's choice surprised He Yunxiao a little.
She didn't choose my colon text?
Thinking about it carefully, it makes sense. Sister Du's literary level is second only to Fan Ziruo, which is very high. It is normal for her to look down on vernacular titles.
The two said goodbye to Du Yinyun and asked several literate maids in succession. This time, just as He Yunxiao had predicted, the maids all chose the colon text.
The two returned to the study side by side, and Fan Ziruo's expression was not good.
He Yunxiao comforted him, "Zi Ruo's name is indeed good, but it is a bit elegant, and elegance has its advantages. Doesn't Miss Du like it very much?"
Fan Zi Ruo said, "Young Master doesn't understand. My sister is very smart. She must have seen that I gave this title, and she chose this title deliberately to take care of me."
This made He Yunxiao a little embarrassed.
It seems that everyone chose herself, and no one chose Fan Zi Ruo.
After all, Fan Zi Ruo is the most talented woman in Yinjing. This online writing teaching has already destroyed her confidence after only teaching the first level.
Confidence is a very entangled thing for the author.
Too much confidence will make people unwilling to listen to suggestions and arrogant; insufficient confidence will make people timid, and the articles they write lack sharpness and arrogance.
So a good author must keep humility and arrogance at the same time, which is very difficult.
He Yunxiao, looking at Fan Zi Ruo who was a little depressed, put the two manuscripts with the title written in front of her again.
"Ziruo, your name 'Qing Ping' is very good."
Fan Ziruo raised his head and looked at He Yunxiao seriously.
He Yunxiao said again, "Qing Ping is really good, even better than the original name of the book, Records of Taihu Swordsmen."
Fan Ziruo's eyes were shining brightly. She looked at He Yunxiao seriously and listened to his tone carefully. No matter how she observed the expression, how she judged the tone, no matter how carefully she observed it or how many times she judged it, she only came to one conclusion - He Yunxiao really thought so.
[Fan Ziruo’s favorability level changed from 75 to 75]
He Yunxiao:? here we go again? what happened? Is the favorability card 75?
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao with soft eyes and said, "No one likes the title of Ziruo's book, so why do you still say it is good?"
He Yunxiao put the system aside and responded to Fan Ziruo's questions seriously.
"Zi Ruo thinks the title of my book is good?"
Fan Ziruo hesitated for a moment and said, "Okay."
"What a fart!"
He Yunxiao suddenly started swearing, which really shocked Fan Ziruo.
"Zi Ruo, you are the most talented woman in Yin Jing and the teacher of Lujiao Academy. With your level, do you really think the title of my book is good?"
"So many people like the title of Young Master's book, so naturally..."
He Yunxiao grabbed Fan Ziruo's hand, "Ziruo, where did your confidence and arrogance go?"
"I……"
"Zi Ruo hopes to be recognized by more readers. This is true, but in order to blindly cater to him, do he have to throw away his most basic judgment?"
"Zi Ruo, let me tell you, my book title is very successful, but it is not good at all! It is not useless, on the contrary, it is very useful and easy to use. But even so, I still feel that it is not good at all. "
"Zi Rui, think carefully about why I said that."
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao holding his hand, his face was a little red, and he pretended that he couldn't remember any strange "differences between men and women." Just pretend you didn't see it.
She said: "Young Master wants to say that the author needs to know what is good and what is useful. There is no conflict between the two."
He Yunxiao smiled and said: "Yes! Don't you want to write a book that others like to read? Okay, you can write it. What is the prerequisite for writing it? You know what they want to read."
Fan Ziruo pretended to take over He Yunxiao's words casually and said, "What novels does the young master like to read?"
At this moment, He Yunxiao looked solemn, like a loyal believer.
"I always like love (hou) love (gong) literature."